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Edit: I was not happy with this image so I tried to fix some errors. Eh...wish I could have done better....thanks to those who gave critique

Wow. A non dark depressing image for once :|

But it involves my characters and story again :|
I kept giving up on this image.... I think it was started in 07, then I tried again in 08....last week I tried again and this time I was able to finish it.

Story behind this: As Ajax (blue spirit) and Randy enter the blue portal to another "world", Randy is bothered by a realization...I can't really give the details as I'm currently writing the story. Don't want to spoil it.


Randy (the Dragon Being) and Ajax © Me. The arm in the back with the blue orb is his "wing"

Many thanks to =Nerversis ~Sake906 *VerlVerl and ~TheArtDungeon for the help and feedback :>

Critiques


:iconlittledigits:
First of all I'd LOVE the col and warm contrast that you have going. The colors really make the initial first glace really powerful. The intensity of the face drew my eye right away , especially the expression. The eye contact really shows the connection between him and that blue creature , it makes me want to know what the story behind them is. Its excellent when an artist brings out that thought process behind a a character and you nailed it. Your coloring is suburb, I can only imagine how long it took you to do because there are lovely and subtle details everywhere.

I think the thing that took away from this piece a bit for me , is that the torso seems a bit short , or his hips a bit too high . Also , His screen left hand also seems up too high , if his upper arm was on a big of a higher angle it could make sense ,but from where his shoulder is , it looks like his upper arm would be too short. It seems like if the screen left arm and the right arm were extended, the left one would be shorter. Although we cant see it it still kind of sticks out on my mind. These make the bottom part look at little ' squished in ' like its trying to fit on the canvas. The other thing that caught my eye were the gold spikes on his arm. They seem so softly colored in compairson to the details of the gold veins and other gold ornaments. The rest of them seem to have sharper angles and details , the ones on the back of his arm, because i think they have rounder edges , really stand out. They don't have as much as that refined ' pop ' as the others.

Those were just nitpicks however. The whole feel of this picture screams power and strength, and you really cant take your eyes off of his face , which is where all the story is to me. So excellent job! Your coloring is something to be reckoned with. When you take the time to really observe this picture , there are so many wonderful details you've added whether it be the gold veins on his arms , the effects coloring , the strands of hair , the lighting. I thoroughly enjoy this piece , is is how you say...epic. :)
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Whoot my first critique ,well just to tell you how amazing you are xD
Man u really amaze me, I really adore the colors here, the blue and the red-ish color really blends well .I love how the blue stands out more and the lil pet creature fits in just right ,the blue orb inside it gives the creature a unique feeling as it it's really alive. Another element that caught my eyes would be the hand, that is a sexy and detailed hand right there XD and also the abs are nicely done strong and solid : ) I also like the gems on and in his arm and the bg with the planets ! .I love ur details seriously : ( !
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:iconakumasama:
Really magnificent =)

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:iconbusiris:
I think as a personal preference, I love seeing your characters and story more than just random different themes, and it is nice to see a new one! I think your anatomy skills have skyrocketed since the last images of him. Very natural face, very creepy eyes really. XD Full lips too. :kiss:

Good skin and muscle too. Always gotta gush about your colors to boot. XD hah But really well done, m'dear! :D
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:icontoshema:
Thats is awesome, you did a great job!! :+fav:Z

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Have you been gifted with the ability of sight once more? Can I go back to seeing more art from you???

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:iconrahll:
Haha, that color scheme, you can't resist it. Looks cool, love the expression. My main beef is that I can't see the beef. Shouldn't there be a cool spikey bwner flying up at us?

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*gets on my knees*
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lmao stop right there
`adonihs says:
*ties my shoe*
`adonihs says:
homo
:iconhikara-productions:
IS THAT A PHOENIX FORM I SPY WITH MY LITTLE EYE? Or am I just crazy? XD

...my goodness. Randy looks so...manly. Before, he looked younger, but something about his face in this one...he looks more mature. Maybe it's the realisation thing, but whatever it is, this change looks marvelous. I really like the texture of his skin, too. It's not smooth like normal skin. It almost reminds me of colored pencils or something. That rough quality hints to a heavier hide, I think it works really well here.

Yep...nothing else to say here! You really have come a far way, just from looking at this pic though. Congrats to you, my friend. :D
:iconhikara-productions:
You, sir, just won one flying intarwebs with this comment.
:icondragonsoulj:
Definitely love it. Now, when shall you reveal more of this story? You gave out 4 pages and then got me definitely hooked. I'm still waiting. :XD:

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